Thursday, April 23, 2009

Le Mot Juste

I'm doing pretty good this week kids. I've posted something every day! I'll try to do better now that school is winding down. Here's an old pantoum based on a Stevie Nicks song that I don't think I've posted here before:

“You used to be…”

“Starshine,
you used to be silver
love light…love affair
you used to make me shiver…”

“You used to be silver”
You used to be gold and blue
“You used to make me shiver”
“If you were wiser you would get out.”

You used to be gold and blue
Make me laugh through my tears
“If you were wiser, you would get out”
You will leave me.

Make me laugh through my tears
“Love light…love affair”
You will leave me
“Starshine…”

3 comments:

流浪汉 瑜伽 Yoga Tramp said...

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P.D. Gourlais said...

This was stunning. I have been here a few times to read it! Thank you!

:) I hope your Finals are going well. ;)

Keep writing King of the Pantoums!

cheers,
p.d.g.

Ray said...

Thanx! I'm glad you liked it!

As a grad student, I don't take exams...just research and write.

I killed myself on my paper on Woolf, but it's done & I very proud of it. As well as the stories I wrote for Sena.